OK, it's too soon to celebrate because there is still tons of editing and work to do, but damn it feels good to have 'Enlist' 'done'.
Will our intrepid heroes join the fleet or go back to beach bunnies and beer? Who is Lt. Pixie and why did she pinch Jake's behind? Is that a proper way for an officer to act? Maybe not but this is a navy that every able bodied spaceman dreams of!
Now the hard work of course. Reread, rewrite, revise, rewrite, read, etc, etc, etc.
Need to add some 'meat' to the story line as well. I want you to feel like you got your 0.99 cents worth after all.
Have a great day and keep writing!